How do you like my poem, "Adonai, here's love by rain"?

Well, there's no harm in loving ones god, provided one does not use that love or ones beliefs about that god as an excuse to harm others. This poor world has seen and is seeing too much of that. Your poem, a bit awkwardly, but with an awkward charm, like a sincere but inexperienced lover, does express your love for your god in strong terms. If I were that god I'd like your poem.